我写的介绍千寻的英语短文

千寻的心

我的英语老师叫我写一篇英文介绍自己最喜欢的电影 我毫不犹豫地选了“千与千寻之神隐”， 呵呵 于是我写了一篇并将它打了上来 ，我的水平不高,如果有错希望大家帮我矫正 ，谢谢了。
                  My favorite movie   
  Today I will introduce an animation（动画片）to you,it's name is "spirited away".The director of this movie is Miyazaki-san(gong qi jun),who is one of the greatest directors of the world .this movie hits Japaness theaters on July 27 2001 and it get the highest box office(票房) in Japan instead of "Titanic".Not only that,this movie also
gain the  oscar of the best Lengthy animation.
  This story is talk about a ten -year-old girl named Chihiro,who is hppen to go into a magical world and her parents become two big because of greed ,so she has to find a way to leave and save their parents .Ftunately,a boy named Haku and lots of friends go to help her to fright against the boss Tangpopo ,finally she leave there and become more brave and mature(成熟)
   The main idea of this movie is to tell you ,if you  communicate with community(社会) ,help and love each other,you will get rid of loneliness and find a true life .

                         （编：忘了说了，我高二.....）

[ 本帖最后由 千寻的心 于 2007-10-28 11:22 编辑 ]

千寻的心

忘了说了 我高二.......

daxian

My favorite movie

    Today I will introduce an animation（动画片）to you, it's name is "spirited away". The director of this movie is Miyazaki-san(gong qi jun), who is one of the greatest directors of the world. This movie hits Japaness theaters on July 27 2001 and it get the highest box office(票房) in Japan instead of "Titanic". Not only that, this movie also gains the oscar of the best Lengthy animation.
    This story talked about a ten-year-old girl named Chihiro, who is happen to go into a magical world and her parents become two pigs because of greed, so she has to find a way to get away and save her parents. Ftunately, a boy named Haku and many friends come to help her to fright against the boss Tangpopo, finally she leave there and become more brave and mature(成熟).
     The main idea of this movie is to tell you, if you communicate with community(社会), help and love each other, you will get rid of loneliness and find a true life.

[ 本帖最后由 daxian 于 2007-10-29 16:28 编辑 ]

LapuTa

写的很好 呵呵 蛮流畅的。。。

イセエビ

哈 不错 有这样的作文机会要好好利用

千寻的心

真的谢谢楼上几位了
呵呵 我今天刚刚在班上演讲完 效果还不错 不过由于有点激动，演讲时手有点发抖
还好啦 老师对我评价不错还和班上的人提到宫崎峻.....

daxian

和班上的人提到宫崎峻啊
不错的感觉
……

叫我白求恩

嘻嘻！~~~
我挖一个坟……
嘻嘻！~~~

BlueHope

弱弱的问句:Miyazaki-san ??
怎么不是Hayao Miyazaki ?

Ohmu

回复 9# BlueHope

在人名后加san，是日语中的敬语，相当于 宫崎骏先生，或者宫老，之类的意思。

Hayao是first name，当然不是你随便叫的。